Monday, November 30, 2015

3rd paper rough draft


 

           

            We live in a high-tech world. People today use technology for almost everything. Your alarm clock wakes you up; you start a pot of Keurig coffee and turn on the T.V.  Those are just 3 easy everyday tasks someone may normally do that currently, we more than not rely on technology for those simple life tasks. People also use technology to keep up with the news, to keep in communication with others, for educational purposes, to schedule their day accordingly, and the list just keeps on going. There is a problem though- we use mass amounts of technology in our everyday lives, which we are now starting to become too dependent on technology to live and manage our everyday lives it is starting to affect our overall health. According to Nielsen’s Total Audience Report, “Americans aged 18 and older spend more that 11 hours a day using electronic devices." Due to people relying too much on technology. There are both physical and mental health issues that cause a detriment to people. We’re starting to let technology run our lives.”

            People’s dependency of technology has numerous negative physical effects. With more use of technology, people are starting spend more time using electronic devices and technology than being active outside. This is causing an increase in obesity. The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention states, “The percentage of children aged 6-11 years in the United States who were obese increased from 7% in 1980 to nearly 18% in 2012. Similarly, the percentage of adolescents aged 12-19 years who were obese increased from 5% to nearly 21% over the same period.” As technology continues to advance, so with the population of obese people. In this article Obesity Rates & Trends Overview by the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation, they indicate that obesity rates have more than doubles in the last 35 years and that the average American is more than 24 pounds heavier today than in 1960. (Paraphrase from an online magazine with no page number.)

 

            As society starts to become more and more dependent on technology, this generation of adolescents have grown up with always having technology around us to be dependent on. This causes this generation of kids to become addicted to technology and start to use it excessively. The excessive use of technology causes many negative mental conditions. Overuse of technology can change a child’s brain. An article in Psychology Today states that the use of technology can alter the wiring of the brain. However, people may argue that adults today do not have any harsh long-term effects from becoming dependent on technology, this current generation of children and teenagers are the first generation of a community that has been born and raised by technology. A summary of an article in Psychology Today, they stated that more than a third of children under the age of two use some form of mobile media. According to a report from Common Sense Media released a specific study that found 38% of kids under the age of two have used tablets or smart phones. The usage of mobile media only grows with the child’s age, with 97% of teens 12-17 spend time online. Technology does not give people new ideas on things, but technology trains the brain to pay attention to multiple stimuli, which leads to distraction or decreased memory. Technology also can affect a child’s brain by affecting his ability to empathize, which can also affect the general public. A study was conducted and later published in the journal Computers in Human Behavior. They took two groups of 6th graders, one was sent to Pali Institute- an outdoor education camp with no electronic devices. For the second group, their life was normal-controlled. Researchers found that went to camp without any electronics scored significantly higher to reading facial emotions or non-verbal clues.

            People can argue that technology has made the economy better and safer. Small businesses can now used advanced internet marketing tools for a small budget in order to compete with big companies. However, Technology has put our privacy and safety at risk. Today, children who are using technology are way younger than they have been before and therefore they typically do not know what information is safe to share online and what is not. According to Enough-Is-Enough, 82% of online sex crimes against children, the sex offenders have used technology and social media to get information about their victim. The overdependence of technology has lead to an increase in online bullying. This is because technology is often not face-to-face; it is easier for the bully to attack someone online than in person. Statistics from NVEEE (National Voice for Equality Education and Enlightenment) explains that “One million children were harassed, threatened, or subjected to other forms of cyber bullying on Facebook in 2011.”

            People have pointed out that we use technology for communication. I agree that technology has its positive affects, such as being able to communicate with family or friends or to stay updated with current events. But us as people need to understand when it’s going too far. When we start becoming too dependant on technology, people become isolated. It is easy to become tempted and to isolate yourself from others, especially when technology is causing an illusion that you are communicating with people on sites like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram, when you’re really not. In an article by Sheri Hosale in RooGirl Magazine website, Sheri Hosale states, “Technology creates the perfect recipe for depression with lack of human contact, overeating and lack of exercise. There is a reason the use of antidepressants are on the rise and the blame can’t be completely dumped on the pharmaceutical companies.” (Quotations from an online magazine with no page numbers.)

            Technology has advanced us as a race and will continue to do so. However, it is our responsibility to not abuse technology to the point where we are unable to function without it.  According to Bruce D. Perry, MD, PhD, senior fellow of CMTAS Initiative, “Modern technologies are very powerful because they rely on one of the most powerful genetic biases [us] have- the preference for visual presented information.” In his book, How Nurture Becomes Nature: The Influence of Social Structures on the Development of the Brain and Maltreated Children, Perry tells us, “Children need real-life experiences with real people to truly benefit from available technologies. Technologies should be used to enhance curriculum and experiences.” We need to learn and actively participate in social functions and outdoor physical activity. This would not only start to diminish our obesity rate, children would not be on any devices as much which will improve their mental health.  Lastly, we need to properly educate everyone on the proper and safe way to use technology.

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